My family Members

My family Members

My family has an old man. He’s as stubborn as (a) mule. If his（用he ，his是他的 的意思） tells you to do something that he wishes(tell sb. to do sth. 告诉某人做某事), [you don’t, and he will think you aren’t good child.]-并成一句话，he will regard you as a rebellious child when you don’t meet his requirements. The old man is my grandpa.

In my(要说明是我的儿童时期，还是爷爷的儿童时期，加my) childhood, he was always abusing（abuse有虐待的意思，不合适，改为criticizing，批评） me. As a result， I disliked him. It was also true that we are(统一时态，用were) completely（副词） opposite（形容词） in personality.

But, there goes an old saying: Blood is thicker than water. To me, he loves me very much（非常喜欢，一般用 love sth very much， very在前面的用法一般用于和形容词一起，比如she is very lovable）. For instance, I especially love fast food, so he often take me to（take sb to a place，take to后面不要用go to了） KFC,[ by to me, but Itself don’t eats. ]-改为，while I eat up all the food with a satisfactory look，he just watches me with a smile.(当我心满意足的吃完所有东西，爷爷只是微笑着看着我)He always says that I should be independent.(用间接引语) so every time when I feel bad，I will think of him.（只有miss sb very much，think of是想到的意思，最好前面加个情况下，你想起你的爷爷）

Now, I cannot find the words to express how much I like her.—这句有很多错误哟，最好改为 in a word，to me，he is the best grandpa in the world.（总之，对我

来说，他是世界上最好的爷爷）