专业英语四级(作文)模拟试卷213(题后含答案及解析)

专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷213 (题后含答案及解析)

题型有： 6. WRITING

PART VI WRITING

1． Our emotions control how we think, feel, behave and actions we take. They also directly affect our bodies. With more pressures from work and life, people nowadays are more inclined to lose control of their emotions. The capacity to manage emotions is important for everyone. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: How to Manage Our Emotions? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

正确答案： How to Manage Our Emotions? Because of the pressure from work or study, many of us sometimes lose our temper and are hysterical. To manage our emotions is thus very important for social harmony. I think we could follow some basic rules to control ourselves. First of all, we could count to ten, when our emotions want to go on an outburst. When we are angry, we might lose our mind and shout at the person in conversation. To count to ten could make our furious steam cool off and return to sanity. In this way, our dialogue will be more sensible, rather than emotional. Secondly, venting our pent-up emotions in a harmless way is also helpful. If we suppress our feelings, we would be a ticking time bomb, which would lead to disastrous consequences when it blows up. That is why we have to release the depressing emotions on a regular basis. For instance, we could climb to the peak of a mountain and shout at the top of our lungs. We could also shoot things in some licensed shooting galleries. Once the emotions are released, they are properly addressed and easier to manage. In conclusion, it is wise to calm down when we are about to get raging; it is also wise to release our emotions in a healthy manner.

解析： 本题属于“问题解决型”作文，涉及的题材是“健康生活”。该题要求考生对“如何控制情绪”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从“压力大”人题，指出我们可以遵循一些基本的准则来控制自我。 第二段：阐述控制情绪的方法。首先，当我们准备要爆发的时候，我们可以数数数到十。数数能消怒；其次，用无害的方式来发泄积聚的情绪。举登高疾呼和射击为例。 第三段：要控制情绪就要懂得保持冷静和适当地释放情绪。 知识模块：作文

2． Students in different countries pay different attention to physical activities. Look at the following chart carefully and write your response in about 200

words, in which you should explain the chart, and give your view on the issue.

Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

正确答案： Average Time Spent on Physical Activity The bar chart illustrates the average amounts of time that students spend on physical activity per day in three countries. As can be seen, American students spend the most time on physical activity, with 72 minutes per day, followed by South Korean students, with 42 minutes. Chinese students on average spend only 12 minutes doing physical exercise per day. It is not surprising to note that Chinese students are the least engaged in physical activities in the three countries, as they are too preoccupied with their study. This is, however, not good for Chinese students’ physical health. To address this issue, schools in China are advised to set an upper limit on students’ homework assignments. Besides, more physical activities could be organized by schools. Monthly themed activities, for example, are a good way to encourage students to try different kinds of physical activities. With more time and more opportunities, Chinese students will be able to catch up with Korean and American students in participating in physical activities.

解析： 该图表显示了中美韩三个国家的学生每天体育锻炼的时间。从图表可见，美国最多、韩国居中、中国最少。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描述图表。 第二段提出个人看法：中国学生花在体育锻炼的时间不多，建议学校减负，并定期举办各种体育运动，让学生有时间、有机会去尝试各种体育锻炼。 第三段总结全文。 知识模块：作文

3． As more and more people are enjoying their holidays in scenic spots, they bring much pollution to these places at the same time. Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning, and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

正确答案： Seashore or Dumping Ground? As can be seen in the picture, a little girl with pigtails is picking up trash along the seashore, which is littered by lots of foam boxes. The basket on her back has already been filled with trash. Apparently, the picture intends to remind us of the serious issue of turning the beautiful seashore into a clumping ground. In my opinion, the authorities concerned must take some necessary measures to address this problem. First, rubbish bins need to be placed properly and sufficiently along the seashore. Sometimes, the reason why people litter is not because they want to do so, but they could not find rubbish bins on the site. If rubbish bins are handily around, I am sure that most people would put the trash in the right place. Second, those who litter in the seashore should be fined and they should also be subject to community service as a form of retribution. This would send a strong message to potential wrongdoers. In short, the systemic placement of

rubbish bins and effective law enforcement would help restore the natural beauty on the seaside.

解析： 这幅图片刻画了一名小女孩在海滩上捡垃圾的情景。从图解看出，该图要读者反思海滩垃圾成堆的成因或对策。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描绘一名小女孩在海滩上捡泡沫饭盒等垃圾，揭示海滩变成了垃圾场的事实。 第二段提出个人看法：有关当局必须采取措施来应对这一问题。其一，海滩上应配备足够的垃圾桶；其二，可以对在海滩上乱扔垃圾的人进行罚款，并要求他们完成社区服务，以作惩罚。 第三段总结全文。 知识模块：作文

4． It has been a general phenomenon that people sacrifice environment for their selfish interest. Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning, and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

正确答案： On Protecting Our Forests As can be seen in the picture, two astronauts arrive at a new planet, only to find bare stumps. They feel sorry to say that, “We are late; all the forests on this planet have been cut down.” This picture offers a reminder that we should cherish forests before it is too late. The valuable resources, once it is destroyed, would be very difficult to restore. Therefore, the protection of forests is so important that we should never neglect it. First of all, forests benefit our life greatly. For instance, a forest is usually compared to “the lung” in the local area, which helps clear the air. Besides, the forest is also helpful in preventing soils from being washed out. Despite its immense value, forest is sometimes destroyed to make way for industrial crops or property development. I think this is a rather short-sighted decision, as we are making money at the expense of our future environment. Natural disasters incurred by soil erosion and sand storms will follow the loss of forests. In short, we should protect forests to ensure a sustainable future for many generations to come. Otherwise they will have to seek another planet with forests to live on, as the picture shows.

解析： 这幅图片刻画了两名宇航员到达一个星球，却发现所有的树木已经被砍光。从图解可以推断该图意在提醒人们要注意保护森林资源、爱护树木。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下： 第一段简要描绘图片，指出图片提醒我们要珍惜树林，宝贵的森林资源一旦损毁，将难以恢复。 第二段阐明保护森林的重要性。森林给我们的生活带来很多的好处(举例：能保护水土、净化空气等)；森林让路于经济作物和房地产的做法是短视的。 第三段总结全文，发出呼吁。 知识模块：作文